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  “Dave it’s sooo hot!” You wined at your boyfriend Dave. This was your first summer in Texas since meeting Dave a year ago on the internet. It was 9 pm and still felt like it was a million degrees out.

“Sorry (Name). This is what you get for livin’ in Texas” Dave shrugged.

“Ya but at least you can take off your shirt” you said pointing out the fact that he was lying on the couch in nothing but board shorts and his signature shades.

“You can take your shirt off you know” he said propping himself up on his elbows.

“And give a perverted guy like you a chance. No way” you said teasingly.

“Calling your boyfriend a pervert. That’s not cool.” Dave fell back onto the couch laughing lightly. After a few moments he sat up again “If your really desperate you can go have a cold shower.” You guessed it wasn’t to bad of an idea. With a sigh you stood and walked off to the bathroom.

“You better not walk in on me though” you called over your shoulder.

  Once in the bathroom you undressed and turned on the shower. You steeped in and let the cool water wash over your hot body. It was absolutely refreshing. You started to hum a silly little tune.


*Dave’s POV*


  Once (Name) was in the shower I got right up and went to the bathroom door. I wasn’t going to pass up this opportunity to see my very beautiful girlfriend naked. We’d been dating for almost a year but it was only a month ago that she had worked up the money to move from the countryside to the city to live with me. I had to admit that she was even prettier in person. I put my ear to the door and listened to (Name)’s humming which slowly turned into singing. Her angelic voice wafted through the door and made me fall for her all over again.

2am; where do I begin,
Crying off my face again.
The silent sound of loneliness
Wants to follow me to bed.

I'm a ghost of a girl that I want to be most.
I'm the shell of a girl that I used to know well


  I heard the water shut off and (Name) step out of the shower. There was a rustling of a towel that told me she was drying off.

Dancing slowly in an empty room,
Can the lonely take the place of you?
I sing myself a quiet lullaby.
Let you go and let the lonely in
To take my heart again.


  I pushed the door open just a crack and poked my head in. I was lucky (Name) had her back to me. “You know you still sound as amazing a you did the first time I heard you” I said as I stepped in the door way. (Name) squealed and spun around nearly dropping the towel in the process. Not that I would have minded if she had.

“Dave I told you not to come in!” She yelled and pushed me out of the room, locking the door behind me.


*Reader’s POV*


  Once you were fully clothed you stepped out of the bathroom to see Dave leaning against the hallway. “What in the world was that about.” You had your arms crossed in front of your chest and your (h/l) (h/c) hair laying limp against your head. You knew Dave could tell by the look on your face that he had better be completely honest.

“Well I was going to peak in at you, but when I heard you start singing I remembered exactly why I fell in love with you in the first place.” You blushed as Dave strode up to you. “Because I could tell from the second I heard your voice that you were an angel.” Suddenly his lips were on yours and his arms around your waist. You brought your arms up around his neck. Once you pulled away for air Dave brushed a strand of hair out of your face. “I love you (Name).”

“I love you too, Dave.” And with that he lead you off to bed for a good nights sleep.
I know it's really short but I just had to get this idea down.
I'm kinda at a loss of inspiration right now so if you guys have any ideas I'd love to hear them, it might help me get over my writers block
Hope you guys like it~
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:iconmelynie:
Melynie Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I feel that I should know that song, but don't recall what it is.
Could you help a sister out?
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bobislovebobislife Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
it's called the lonely by christina perri. :3
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:iconmelynie:
Melynie Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
oooohhhh!!
thank you so much!!!
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bobislovebobislife Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
you're very welcome!! :)
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ferriluver101 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015
squuuuuuuuuuuuuuueel!
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Fantroll-Mowzers Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Student Artist
Sure, yeah. 'Sleep'.


When he was tryin' to peak at me in the shower just a minute ago..?


Hah, 'sleep'.
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ferriluver101 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015
oh my god ye :B I have the goofiest smile right nao
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Senator-Meowmix Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
lol we all know theres not going to be much sleep tonight
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Fantroll-Mowzers Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Student Artist
Nope XD
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KittyYOUKAI5125 Featured By Owner Edited Jan 12, 2015  Student Artist
Yeah it normally gets really hot in the summer time here in houston, btw the ending was super cute!😘
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hemospectrumkiller Featured By Owner Edited Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
It doesn't actually get that hot here, I live in Austin and it isn't all that hot.
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BloodyMetalAlchmist Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D so cuuuuuuute
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dragongirl2022 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
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ShyShyKiyomi Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014
ohmygod..........
dave:shy what the fuck are you reading?
*closes laptop* n-nothing
dave:*smirking*
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RachWantsHerCupcake Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OGODWHY ILIVEINVEGAS-SOUTSJUSTASHOTANDIHATEIT

#ColdWeatherForLifePlz
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ramenbaka11 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014
"This was your first summer in Texas" ha. Ha haha HA. *cries because it's so fucking hot*
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eveechick9 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
the funny thing is is that i just took a cold shower XD
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SilverstripeGray Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
THANK YOU FOR EXISTING
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EvilAngel3 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very fluffy and adorable. :)
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Lousiey Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sleeping? No, no, no. I dont think so.
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HomestuckYeah Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
I kind of want to read this over and over and over again it was so cute
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Eridansbb Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014
"Good nights sleep"Rose's Creepy Eyebrows Icon 
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BESTUSERNAMEEVER413 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015
Shit I spelled john wrong!
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BESTUSERNAMEEVER413 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015
Dave: rose not the eyebrows!
Jhon: auhg rose!
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HappyKawaiiEmma Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is exactly what I was thinking. Thank you, eyebrow wiggling Rose! :)
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FlashKittyStudios Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Bro hug Thank you for that comment made my day
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kendiwolf Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yeah, sleep, that's what they did. lolz jk
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Kokoapurr Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That moment when you're already listening to the song. ._.
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EmptyAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
Oh my god
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Kokoapurr Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Your icon. That is awesome.
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EmptyAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
Thanks
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AzoreaWitchOfRage Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
we all know the 'sleeping' part didn't happen
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wackart493 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"and then he lead you to bed for a good nights sleep" If you know what I mean
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StealthElf Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconspongebobrapefaceplz: ohonhonhon~! i think we all know what you mean~! :iconpervydaveplz:
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wackart493 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hehehehehehehehehehhehehhehehehhehehehehehheheehehehe
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Bibi17624 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Dancing slowly in an empty room...
Can the Lonely take the place of you?
I sing myself a quiet lullaby,
Let you go and let the lonely in...
To take my heart again...

I love Christina Perri! :D
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MomoInWonderland Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I hve no idea how to note you? Do you mind noting me
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MomoInWonderland Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Whoops commented on the wrong story sorryn
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ShenDrawer Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I listened to that song like 50 times and cried myself to sleep! I like that song.Waaaah! Waaaah! 
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WTFAnimeReader Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Whats with dave and showers? This is the 3rd fanfic iv found about them. (Not that i don't like them, infact, i luv them! :$
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kareziloves Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Artist
This was one of my first stories i have read from here...AND I LOVE IT!!!!! :)
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Xixugatsu Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013   General Artist
I am fucking loving this.
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Chipsyxdispy Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Student Writer
*claping* omg so cool
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MagnoliaAsakamei Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMFG THATS MY FAVOURITE CHRISTINA PERRI SONG!!! *hugs to death*
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QuinntheConqueror Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
THAT SONG
THAT SONG IS THE BEST SONG
(awesome story too uvu)
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Magmoogle Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thats my favorite song stop it stop it i love this so much shefjhlghdjghsldjgdf;vdlfkvlkomg
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Tasha8976 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
I swear to god, I freaked out when I read the part about me singing that song and THAT VERY FUCKING SONG came on on my Ipod. WHAT. THE. ACTUAL. FUCK.
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carrie2512 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
That song - I know that song - I love That song.
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YasminKirkland1031 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
Are you watching me? I just got out of the shower and was listening to that song... 0.0 Stalker...
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Elaine-Moon Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What song is that?
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